The LOOK Challenge

Jacquie Rogers, author of the Hearts of Owyhee series, tagged me in the LOOK Challenge. "Look" is one of those words for which writers are always on the lookout. Like other words related to the senses, "look" can distance readers from the point-of-view character's experience, so we try t use it with caution. The Look Challenge is a game writers play to remind us to keep an eye out for the overused word and replace it with something more evocative when appropriate. (Plus, the game lets us show off snippets of our works in progress.)

The rules of the Look Challenge require those who've been tagged to find the first occurence of "look" in their work in progress, and then post that sentence and the surrounding paragraph(s). Then they have to tag an unspecified number of friends. Here's my contribution. This is the opening to GHOSTS IN THE SHADOWS, a contemporary romantic suspense:

Sam Whiteoak's shack in the Dragoon Mountains
The body was not yet cold.

That meant nothing, in Britton Moonchaser’s experience. Arizona’s relentless heat could keep a man warm six months into the grave. Sam Whiteoak hadn’t been dead long, though. His remains weren’t bloated or stiff. And there wasn’t a mark on him. At ninety-four, he’d simply reached his expiration date.

Brit gathered the empty shell in his arms and rose from the dusty ground, thanking God or Usen—assuming either existed—for small favors. Sam looked at peace…but Sam would have looked peaceful if the desert had burst into flame around him. That both irritated Brit and somewhat assuaged his guilt.


Now for the tagging part: Cindy Nord, Devon Matthews, Kirsten Arnold, Marie-Nicole Ryan, Alethea Williams, and Marlene Cronkite, y'all are it!

Designs of the Times: Victorian Reticules

Silk crochet with metallic beads, 1840-1850
Courtesy Los Angeles County Museum of Art
Whenever I have a question about what a proper lady in the nineteenth century might have worn, I consult Cindy Nord. Not only is Cindy a talented writer and a lifesaver of a critique partner, but she’s also an expert on historical fashion — particularly fashions of the Victorian Era. A former Civil War re-enactor, Cindy has given lectures about Victorian clothing in all sorts of venues … dressed for the part, of course.
In her debut novel, NO GREATER GLORY (Samhain Publishing, July 2012), Cindy puts a chunk of her fashion knowledge to good use. Heroine Emaline McDaniels, the widow of a Southern plantation owner, may be watching her world come apart at the seams, but her wardrobe hasn’t suffered. It's delightful watching Emaline dress — and undress — in several scenes. (The hero, Yankee Col. Reese Cutteridge, enjoys the undressing part, in particular.)

Here, Cindy gives a brief rundown about an often-overlooked element of any well-dressed nineteenth-century lady’s wardrobe: her handbag.

Reticule: a Handbag by Any Other Name

Sterling silver mesh reticule
(personal collection of
Mary Elizabeth Todd)

Merriam-Webster defines “reticule” (RET-i-kyool; also spelled reticle) as a woman’s small bag or purse, usually in the form of a pouch with a drawstring, made of net, beading, brocade, etc. Unlike today’s purses — in which we carry everything but the kitchen sink — the delicate bags popular during the Victorian era were large enough to contain little more than a handkerchief, a scent bottle, important keys, and perhaps a coin or two.

The material from which reticules were made varied based upon when a bag would be carried. Simple cotton handkerchief designs or patterned wools and canvas were suitable for everyday use. For evenings out, a well-dressed lady’s bag might be made of silk or satin with delicate beadwork, or even elegant silver mesh chainmail.


Glass beading over silk, 1840-185
Courtesy Metropolitan Museum of Art, New York
Beadwork was particularly fashionable for much of the era, but only wealthy women could afford the price of an elegant hand-beaded reticule. The smaller the beads and the tighter their pattern, the more expensive the piece. Only the crème de la crème of society were able to purchase reticules bearing 100 beads per square inch.

Closures varied from simple drawstrings to more formal formed-brass metal headers with snaps. But always the item would be worn suspended from the wrist or attached to the waist by a clip to allow the lady’s hands to be free to support a fan (in the evenings) or a parasol (during afternoon outings).

As women of today look forward to the newest handbag from Coach or Louis Vuitton, the women of yesteryear perused the latest edition of Godey’s Ladies Book with glee. So anticipated were the delightful reticule patterns that each month’s collection offered several to choose from and usually included intricate beadwork examples, as well.

1869 Gladstone bag
Courtesy GladstoneBag.com
When a Victorian lady traveled, she carried a metal-framed bag called a Gladstone. According to GladstoneBag.com, “the original Gladstone Bag [was] developed in the mid-19th century and represented a kind of suitcase built on a rigid frame that could be split into two separate parts.  It was usually made of very strong leather and was often ‘tied’ with lanyards also made of leather.”  The Gladstone bag was designed by leather craftsman J.G. Beard, who named the bag after Prime Minister William Gladstone [1809–1898], a popular politician renowned for his love of travel.


True love awaits in the writing of Cindy Nord, whose work has won or finaled in numerous competitions, including the prestigious Romance Writers of America Golden Heart Awards. A luscious blend of history and romance, her stories wrap both genres around fast-paced action and emotionally driven characters. Visit her at her website, or connect with her on Facebook or Twitter.






NO GREATER GLORY

Amid the carnage of war, he commandeers far more than just her home.

No Greater Glory by Cindy Nord
Widowed plantation owner Emaline McDaniels has struggled to hold on to her late husband’s dreams. Despite the responsibilities resting on her shoulders, she’ll not let anyone wrest away what’s left of her way of life—especially a Federal officer who wants to set up his regiment's winter encampment on her land. With a defiance born of desperation, she defends her home as though it were the child she never had…and no mother gives up her child without a fight.

Despite the brazen wisp of a woman pointing a gun at his head, Colonel Reece Cutteridge has his orders. Requisition Shapinsay and its valuable livestock for his regiment’s use, and pay with Union vouchers. He never expected the widow’s fierce determination, then her concern for his wounded, to upend his heart—and possibly his career.

As the Army of the Potomac goes dormant for the winter, battle lines are drawn inside the mansion. Yet just as their clash of wills shifts to forbidden passion, the tides of war sweep Reece away. And now their most desperate battle is to survive the bloody conflict in Virginia with their lives—and their love—intact.

Available from Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Google Books, Kobo, and other ebook sellers. (Audiobook due in October 2012; print version set for release in June 2013.)

Famous Last Words: Captain William Fetterman

William Fetterman, Capt., U.S. Army

(For an updated, more detailed version of this post, visit Sweethearts of the West, where I blog on the 12th of each month.)

“Give me eighty men and I'll ride through the whole Sioux Nation.”

So said Captain William Fetterman as he assumed command of a U.S. Army detail tasked with escorting a wood-cutting expedition through the northern Wyoming Territory in 1866. A fellow officer had declined the command after mounting, and failing to sustain, a similar effort two days earlier.

On the morning of Dec. 21, within minutes of their departure from Fort Phil Kearney, Fetterman, 79 infantry and cavalry troops, and two civilian scouts encountered a small band of Oglala led by Crazy Horse. Despite orders not to engage "hostiles," the detail gave chase … right into an ambush. A force of about 2,300 Lakota and Northern Cheyenne led by Red Cloud killed the entire detachment, then scalped, beheaded, dismembered, disemboweled, and/or castrated the dead soldiers.

Native casualties: 63.

Whether Fetterman deliberately disobeyed his commanding officer’s order or the commander massaged the truth in his official report remains the subject of debate.

Among the Sioux and Cheyenne, the event is known as the Battle of the Hundred Slain. Whites know it better as the Fetterman Massacre.

Ten years later, Lt. Col. George Armstrong Custer would make a similar mistake at Little Big Horn in Montana.

Lone Stars: Llano, Texas

The Llano County courthouse, built in 1893 and still in use.
Llano (pronounced LAN-oh) is located in the Texas Hill Country about an hour north of Austin, very near the geographic center of Texas. Founded in response to a legislative act creating Llano County in February 1856, the town was established June 14 of the same year. A public vote under a live oak tree on the south side of the Llano River chose the town's location: a tract of 250 acres donated by a local rancher.

The area boomed from 1886-1893 after iron ore deposits were discovered in nearby Iron Mountain. With high hopes for the future, the Llano Improvement and Furnace Company embarked upon a mission to build an iron furnace and foundry. Land speculators from Dallas and northern states poured into the area with investment money, wanting to be part of "the Pittsburgh of the West." The population soared to 7,000 in 1890, encouraging the Austin and Northwestern Railroad to extend its line to a terminal on the north side of what promised to be a thriving metropolis. Increased access to transportation attracted granite quarying and finishing companies intent on profiting from the abundance of granite in the surrounding hills.

Then the bubble burst: The iron ore deposits proved insufficient for commercial exploitation, and the Llano Improvement and Furnace Company abandoned its project. The company's withdrawal threw the town's big plans into disarray. Although charters had been sold to construct a dam, an electric power plant, a streetcar system, and electric streetlights, only a small dam and the streetlights were completed. Speculators and local businesses lost fortunes as a result.

A wagon hauls a slab of granite through the streets
of Llano in this undated postcard photo.
A series of fires in the early 1890s, probably set to collect insurance money, destroyed much of the town; consequently, insurance companies refused to provide any coverage in the area for a number of years.

The granite processors remained. Today, Llano's primary industries are farming, ranching, and granite quarying and finishing. The town's population is roughly 3,000 people except during November and December, when the undisputed "Deer Capital of Texas" overflows with hunters.

Famous Last Words: John Adams and Thomas Jefferson

As the fiftieth anniversary of the adoption of the Declaration of Independence dawned on July 4, 1826, only three of fifty-six signatories of the noble document still lived: John Adams, Thomas Jefferson (the third President of the U.S.), and Charles Carroll of Carrollton. By the end of the day, only Carroll remained.
Thomas Jefferson
(portrait by Rembrandt Peale, 1800)

Jefferson, whose health had been deteriorating since July the previous year, was confined to his bed at Monticello in June 1826, felled by a combination of kidney failure and penumonia. In the evening on July 3, he spoke his last words: "Is it the fourth yet?" His grandson and his doctor assured him the fourth was only hours away. Seventeen hours later, at 1 p.m. July 4, 1826, Jefferson passed away at the age of 83.
John Adams
(portrait by Asher B. Durand, c. 1800)

Adams, who maintained a close friendship with Jefferson until the vicious politics of the 1800 presidential election drove a wedge between them, had reconciled with Jefferson in 1812. The two men corresponded frequently and were well aware of one another's ill health. On July 4, 1826, at his home in Braintree, Massachusetts, Adams gave a toast to the country he helped found: "Independence forever." Later that evening, after suffering a heart attack and unaware his friend had died several hours earlier, 91-year-old Adams breathed his last words: "Thomas Jefferson survives."

The nearly concurrent deaths of two political giants on such a momentous day seemed preordained and fitting. Carroll survived for another six years, closing the book on an extraordinary chapter in history with his death on Nov. 14, 1832.

Lone Stars: Chappell Hill, Texas

Old Town Chappell Hill today
(photo by S. Braswell of Spring, Texas)
Located roughly halfway between Austin and Houston, Chappell Hill was founded in 1847 on 100 acres owned by a woman. (Texas granted women extraordinary rights for the time.) Mary Haller and her husband Jacob built a stagecoach inn on the site -- at the junction of two major stagecoach lines -- and soon other folks from the Deep South migrated to the area and planted cotton, for which the climate and soil were perfectly suited.

By 1856, the population had risen to 3,000 people and the town included a sawmill, five churches, and a Masonic Lodge, in addition to two of the first colleges in the state -- one for men and another for women. A railroad line followed soon after.

During the War of Northern Aggression (otherwise known as the American Civil War), the men of Chappell Hill served in both Hood's Texas Brigade (infantry) and Terry's Texas Rangers (cavalry). Two years after the war ended, in 1867, many of the Chappell Hill men who survived the war perished in a yellow fever epidemic that decimated the town and the rest of the area around the Brazos River.
Longhorn relaxing in the bluebonnets near Chappell Hill

Chappell Hill never recovered, plunging from one of the largest, most vibrant communities in the state to little more than a memory.

Today, Chappell Hill is one of the best historically preserved towns in Texas. Main Street is listed as a National Register Historic District by the National Register of Historic Places; restored homes, churches, businesses and the Stagecoach Inn offer tours to tourists. If you're ever in the area, it's worth a visit.

Famous Last Words: Black Jack Ketchum


Black Jack Ketchum
(An updated and expanded version of this post may be read at Sweethearts of the West, where I blog on the 12th of each month.)

"Can't you hurry this up a bit? I hear they eat dinner in Hades at twelve sharp, and I don't aim to be late."

Whether or not he aimed to be late, Thomas Edward "Black Jack" Ketchum missed the dinner bell by more than an hour on April 26, 1901. In fact, his hanging was delayed by more than four hours while authorities tried to ensure his execution was both humane and permanent.

Black Jack, a native of San Saba County, Texas, also was known as "the handsome train robber." Between 1892 and 1899, he and his older brother Sam, along with a gang of other young men -- all of whom were described as well-mannered and well-dressed, riding good horses and flashing plenty of money -- "liberated" payrolls and other large sums of cash from trains passing through the Four Corners area of the Southwest. Their largest take, in September 1897, totalled about $60,000 in gold and silver.

Sam died in jail in July 1899 as a result of wounds he received during a shootout with a posse near Santa Fe, New Mexico. One month later, Black Jack was shot by the conductor of a train he was robbing alone. He didn't resist when either a posse or a railroad crew (there's a dispute) found him the next morning.

After he was sentenced to hang, the date of the execution was delayed several times by arguments about where final justice should take place, since several towns wanted the honor. Finally, reacting to a rumor that the old gang planned to break Black Jack out of jail, the hanging became the center of a carnival in Clayton, New Mexico. Despite an extended debate about the length and strength of the rope necessary for the deed, something went wrong. Shortly after 1 p.m., Ketchum was decapitated as his body plunged through the scaffold's trapdoor. He was 37 years old.

Black Jack Ketchum bears the dubious distinction of being the only man sentenced to die in New Mexico for "felonious assault upon a railway train." Apparently his botched execution set the residents of Union County back a mite, because Black Jack also was the only man ever hanged in Union County. Until Eva Dugan suffered the same fate at the Pinal County, Arizona, prison in 1930, Black Jack Ketchum was the only person in the U.S. who literally lost his head to a hangman's noose ordered by a court.